by Qix » Fri Dec 02, 2011 5:01 pm
Thanks to all who entered this week. It's been a privilege to preside over such a large crop of clues, and there's been a wealth of talent on show.
Because of the number of entries, I've had to be rather unforgiving this week, particularly with the definitions.
Having said that, there is a fairly large shortlist, and I decided to pick a top five rather than three this week, to reflect the number and quality of the entries.
So, down to business:
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Australian beheaded for defamation?
The wordplay is good here, and "beheaded for defamation" integrates the deletion indicator well into the surface. Australia, though, is regarded as a continent rather than an island, and solvers might have some difficulty with this. Decapitation seems like a slightly excessive judicial response to slander, but these things happen in crosswords.
Clue for calumny, empty slur about chemical compound bordering state (7)
This is a great effort, and it's almost there, but not quite. The wordplay is pretty decent in both sense, except for "chemical compound" for E. The drug is, of course, a chemical compound, but, like other compounds such as water or sugar, it's primarily known for something else, so it would be pretty tricky for the solver to get. "Chemical compound" for ALUM is fine. "Chemical compound bordering state" is an odd phrase, and makes the surface sound a little clunky. It was quite a feat to put this together, but it doesn't quite make it to the shortlist.
Sloucher releases painful cry showing this pair of braces to be deceptively tight, it is said (7)
Good wordplay. It wasn't so easy to clue "SL AND ER", but this does it well. Unfortunately, while "tight" is synonymous with "mean", this is only true for the "stingy" sense of mean, so the definition isn't right.
Lesser characters damaging jaw? (7)
Unlike the previous clue, where I thought that the two pairs of letters were clued effectively, I think that this is less successful, although it could work as part of a very libertarian clue in some publications. "Damaging jaw" is a nicely deceptive definition. The surface is less polished than some others this week.
qball
Bad mouth badly affecting speech? (7)
Both halves of the DD work OK, and the double meaning of "affecting" is used well. The use of both "bad" and "badly" like this, though, weakens the surface reading.
Something like 'Andrew Neil does Ecstasy' reportedly starts to offend (7)
The acrostic part works well (although it wouldn't get into the Times because of the reference to a living person (other than HMQ)). "To offend" is not quite the same as slander, though, as it's a broader term. A somewhat vague definition can work when, as here, the wordplay is straightforward, but this is outdone by a few other clues this week.
It's pronounced 'malice' (7)
This CD is fine, although it's probably a little too obvious.
Flighty ladies with, it's said, an eye for the sailors? On the contrary - it's malicious gossip (7)
This is complicated, but it's also very well put-together. The surface reads plausibly. I'd have preferred just "sailors" to "the sailors" since other seafarers are available, and the clue is long at 16 words, but this is *** SHORTLISTED ***
steveran
Mud sled ran erratically (7)
The wordplay is good, and "mud" is fine as a definition. I've never heard of a "mud sled", though. Perhaps a little too mundane for shortlisting this week.
Dish the dirt on Berlusconi, say, holding the french letters (7)
"Berlusconi, say" for SR is very oblique, as is "the French letters" for "L AND E", but it's not beyond what might appear in print. The surface is chuckleworthy, and this one is *** SHORTLISTED ***
Mud toss lands on queen (7)
This one works only as a down clue, as "on" has the opposite positional meaning for across clues. For the surface, I think that it would be the mud that landed, rather than the toss, so the word order could do with being changed.
Issue lies in serious financial commitments withheld around the country (7)
"Serious financial commitments withheld around the country" is good, but "issue lies" is not quite the same as slander.
timmah
Dirt throwing point scorer
Everything works OK here, and it's a decent clue, just lacking the sparkle of the best this week.
RE:DNA, laboratory scientist initially returns dubious report
I like the wordplay here, although RE:DNA is giving too much away. "Re" could have been "concerning", for example, and there are other possibilities for DNA too. "Dubious report" is a rather slack definition, but there's a very good clue hiding not far from the surface here.
Case of skull-duggery initially involves an evil relation, heads to this ?
Case of skull-duggery initially involves an evil relation, leads to this ?
A few problems here. As timmah noted, the hyphen really is a deal-breaker. Skull-duggery isn't a word, and nor is duggery. There's the nucleus of a decent idea in this, but it needs more work.
thewizenedgnome
German article on small network is potentially libellous (7)
The wordplay is good, but I'm not so keen on the definition, because it leads the solver to expect an adjective, when slander ought to be a noun or a verb.
Original members of Slade and Queen create audible assault (7)
I like this. "Original members of Slade" is cleverly phrased. Some would say that the number of letters should be specified, but I think that it's fairly explicit here. "Original members" is understood to mean "letters at the start," which must mean "before half-way". There can, then, only be one or two, and the plural clarifies that nicely. "Audible assault" is OK as a definition I think. On that subject, the offence of slander is defined somewhat differently here in Scotland than it is in other jurisdictions, and it encompasses what would be called "libel" elsewhere. More on this later.
GymBunnies
Utter crap from Australian redneck sacking "poofter" (7)
The definition is not quite the same as slander, and, while admitting a substantial degree of ignorance regarding Australian sociology, I suspect that "invariably" in GymBunnies explanation is probably something of an exaggeration. If there were a prize for the Paul Hogan Show tribute clue of the week, this would get it, and it rates highly on the chucklemeter.
It's said to be poisonous (7)
It's incorrectly said to be poisonous (7)
Excellent CD, and the revision makes all the difference. *** SHORTLISTED ***
Wacko Jacko result possibly a false negative, we hear? (7)
The logic of the explanation would suggest that slander was the cause, rather than the result, surely? In any case, I don't think that the solver could be expected to reach slander from there. The definition is a little vague, but could have been OK with explicit wordplay.
pepsib
Smear campaign the German ends after the French enter Senegal (7)
This is pretty good, although I think that it would have to be "enters" for the cryptic reading - you can't really say "the enter", whether it's French or English.
False report starts scandalous lies about nude doctor examining redhead (7)
"Starts {acrostic fodder}" doesn't work here, because it doesn't indicate the starting letters of the follwing words grammatically.. "Starts of..." or "starts to..." might be OK. "{fodder} starts" also works.
Slag off Hawaiian? Not me (7)
Slag off Hawaiian? Not I (7)
I really shouldn't allow another bite at the cherry, because it's really equivalent to editing, but I'll let this one go. The second version here is a good clue. *** SHORTLISTED ***
yamraaj
Roast beef? (7)
This doesn't quite come off as a DD for me. "Roast" is "to criticize excessively" and "beef", as a verb, is "to grumble" (at least in my version of Chambers).
cutlp
"Pork pies?!" doctor snarled (7)
"Doctor snarled" is very nice, but slander is not really just lies, there must be some malice, or, at least, some resultant damage, I think.
spchennai
Killed without one German for defamation (7)
No explanation given, so I assume that this is SLA(I)N + DER. The surface lacks coherence, I think, although the wordplay is OK.
Emily
Curse as power tool circles left (7)
"Power tool circles left" is very good for L in SANDER, particularly since many sanders do employ circular motion. I don't think that "curse" quite cuts it a definition, though.
Newt without a morning insult? (7)
You can remove A and AM in order from SALAMANDER to reach SLANDER, so that element works OK, but the surface is pretty weak.
AvaGo
Speech that may be heard at the bar (7)
A case of slander might be heard in court, but the slander itself? Well, it would be repeated in the context of the case, I suppose, but I don't think that the wording quite captures the meaning that was intended.
Slurring words (7)
There's some nice misdirection going on here, and this is a decent clue.
It is land erroneously thought to contain dirt (7)
A couple of issues here. "It" and "thought" don't play a part in the wordplay, and only serve to pad the surface. In addition, the whole clue can't be read as a definition because either slander is "actual" dirt, or a "thought" can't, in itself, constitute slander, depending on which way you read the clue.
timmah
Case of slur involves lies, aspersions, nasty defamatory exaggerations initially, amounting to this?
This is a good try. The surface is clunky, and "exaggerations" wouldn't necessarily be involved. It's not up there with the best this week, though.
S T Sahasrabudhe
Snarled, giving insult (7)
I'm not a big fan of "giving" as an anagram indicator, but I'll concede that it can work. OK, but not one of my favourites.
axiom
Slight plus meeting European leader in camera (7)
This hangs together well, and "in camera" is very nice. I don't like "Slight plus" much, though, and this one just misses a shortlisting.
Pearl
Learned peer oddly postdates expenses; ultimately becomes a ruinous false statement (7)
Tremendous wordplay; "Learned peer oddly" is very good, alluding to the Law Lords (as were). The surface lets this down though, as the peer is the subject of the sentence, and can't really become a statement.
Half-true sermon containing put down (7)
Again, some very neat wordplay. This is very close to being an excellent clue. Sadly, I don't think that "half-true" can really mean "half-present", so the deletion isn't properly indicated. Very good attempt.
Touchdown in first half of series a result of a misplayed charge? (7)
Touchdown (all one word) is a noun, and could mean "landing", but not land. "Touch down" could mean LAND, but doesn't work for the surface. Also, the causality is back-to-front; {wordplay} a result of {definition} should really be the other way round, QM or not.
Lie uncouthly as not a successful parachuter (7)
"As not a" for S is extremely cute. "Successful parachuter" - superficially nice, although the more common form (and the one that's in Chambers) is parachutist. I'm not taken by "lie uncouthly" as a definition, and the surface doesn't fit together very well. Nevertheless, all of these clues have plenty going for them, and I expect Pearl to win a DIYCOW soon.
Poongothai
Sierra Leone and Erithrea, over domain, accuse falsely (7)
SL, AFAIK, isn't a generally accepted abbreviation for Sierra Leone - it's not the IVR code, which is accepted in some crosswords (eg the Telegraph, although not the Times), although it is a top-level domain suffix on the internet (which, I think, isn't an accepted abbreviation in any major crossword). ER is OK as the IVR for Eritrea (although the Times wouldn't have this either). The word order in the clue is stilted, and doesn't read well.
Doctor leans awkwardly for smear (7)
This is on the acceptable side of anagram indirectness for me, and the clue reads very smoothly. *** SHORTLISTED ***
Learn key smoothly first to perfect slur (7)
"Smoothly first" doesn't properly indicate S. "Smoothly at first" would be fine. "To perfect" can't really take the preceding words as its object, so the anagram isn't properly indicated either.
Deliver smear regularly otherwise (7)
This is not on the acceptable side of anagram indirectness. We have "deliver" which the solver has to make into LAND, and then form an anagram of it. That's not allowed.
Penfold_61
Falsely claim for end of nail caught in power tool (7)
The wordplay is fine, of course, but I think that "falsely claim" isn't quite slander.
Lying in state in West Africa with monarch (7)
As above, I don't think that "lying" is enough for slander, and SL doesn't work for me as Sierra Leone.
ampere
Near-total bias of upwardly mobile redtop editor resulted in lies being told (7)
"Near-total bias" is pretty good for SLAN; "of" is redundant and potentially misleading. Some would disallow "redtop" for R (the Times certainly would), but I don't mind it. "Lies being told", as I've said before, is not quite the same as slander.
Public untruths Dean sorted out in camera (7)
"In camera" is good, as in axiom's clue. "Public untruths," again, isn't quite slander, although the juxtaposition of "public" and "in camera" is a nice idea.
It's an offence (7)
Much too vague, I'm afraid.
First slugger to register punch with little hesitation gives black eye (7)
"First slugger" doesn't give S. "Slugger's first" would be OK, for example, or, for an across clue, you could have "To register puch on slugger's head," or something like that. I don't buy "black eye" as a definition either, I'm afraid.
bingybong
Pound into smooth surface with topless woman's mud (7)
Pound into the surface with mud? Not sure about that. A very good attempt to paint a mud-wrestling picture, but the surface lets it down a little. "Smooth surface" for sand is very good, though.
Malicious report of Lewis's hero losing head : European article (7)
I don't like the use of "of" as a connector between def and subsidiary indication, and the surface is a little lacklustre, but this is a decent attempt otherwise.
Press charges ? (7)
I see what you're getting at, but this is too vague, and inexplicably plural, too.
Labour left ran with Ed's malicious speech (7)
"Labour" as a transitive anagram indicator is unusual, because it's rarely used in that sense in modern English, but it works OK for me. The surface hangs together very well, and this is *** SHORTLISTED ***
yamraaj
Moon lander's an outright lie? (7)
"Moon" as an anagram indicator? Seriously? I don't see that at all. The definition isn't quite slander, and, in the surface, the lander itself couldn't be a lie (although a claim that it had, in fact, landed, could be)
Glen
Rubber fitted round end of pencil produces smear (7)
Excellent. *** SHORTLISTED ***
Arrive in South American hospital that is criminally run down (7)
"Criminally run down" is very nice. ER, though, isn't a hospital, it's a department of a hospital, so that element doesn't work.
Often, Private Eye gets sued for reporting it, Hislop loses case, and, er, that's it (7)
Another good effort here. I like the wordplay, but "and er" gives too much away, I think. The definition is rather too obvious, and it's a long clue, but this is a pretty good clue with a coherent surface.
Hislop loses case, and, er, that's it (7)
The same comments apply to the wordplay, but a definition is really needed here.
crucifer
Low-lying (7)
The definition here is better than simply "lying", because it implies a degree of ill-intent, but, on its own, I don't think this is enough to get the solver to the solution. It could work as a definition if there were to be some clear wordplay...
Low-lying region between Sweden and Estonia and Russia's Western borders (7)
...and here it is. Nicely integrated geographical theme, too. I'd like to have seen a QM at the end - the solver could do with a hint that there are shenanigans going on with that hyphen - but it's *** SHORTLISTED ***
The Girl without a Bad Word to Say (7)
"The Girl" is just too indirect a reference, and the def isn't quite there either. I think it's also unclear that you only intend one A to be removed, although had the rest of the clue been good, that would have been forgivable.
boxwood
Bank's replacement of worker with learner results in mudslinging (7)
He-he. Nice PDM in this one. It might not make it into the Times, but the surface is good, and reflects one school of thought about the labour market. *** SHORTLISTED ***
Dump on ground in London area, west of Richmond upon Thames (7)
Good attempt to disguise the definition here, but "upon Thames" is redundant and could well have the solver looking for wordplay elements that aren't there.
Husky
It's snarled inaccurately (7)
It doesn't quite pull off the &lit trick, because slander need not be snarled. "It may be snarled..." would have been better, but, even then, not up with the best this week.
Initially scurrilous lies and abuse; ultimately an attested offence and misdemeanour (7)
This is pretty good. I'm not entirely convinced by "offence and misdemeanour" at the end, but *** SHORTLISTED ***
It's insulting to say the Queen is lagging behind and not leading state (7)
"State" for Queensland is OK, although potentially difficult for non-Australians, but otherwise the worplay is good. I like the way that Queen is used both as a deleted and as an added element, that's pretty neat. However, the definition isn't quite right.
Boaz
Slight, possibly with adjective for effect initially? (7)
The double meaning of "slight" is cleverly exploited here, although slight isn't quite the same as slander. I'm not sure it's &lit as such, but the wordplay is very good. Just misses the shortlist.
Lie with hairy danglers finally hanging out (7)
This is stiff competition with GymBunnies for LOL of the week. Sound wordplay, excellent choice of anagram indicator. "Lie" isn't quite the definition, though.
shyam
Slur a European confesses to? (7)
I think that this is supposed to be a homophone, but it doesn't work for me. I'm not convinced by "confesses to" as a homphone indicator either, if that's what it is.
Moreover Sri Lanka faces the source of ethnic and regional slur (7)
Moreover = AND; {SL} {AND} {ER}
As shyam rightly points out, SL isn't an acknowledged abbreviation for Sri Lanka, and, notwithstanding the possibility that it could be referred to in that way, I don't see it as fair to solvers. "Faces" can work in the way that's intended here, as a positional indicator, although I wonder whether it might work better with a different word order. The wording is a little clunky, and, for a newspaper headline, "moreover" is a word that I can't imagine ever being used.
mrknip
Vocal slurring also found in audible difficulty with pronunciation (7)
"Vocal slurring" is a pretty decent definition (although, as mentioned above, I haven't insisted on the spoken element because of Scottish law). The homophone doesn't work for me at all. This is due, in part, to the tendency of people is Scotland to use different vowel sounds for different vowels. Here, the U in "slur" would be pronounced in the same way as the U in "sun". If "sler" were a word, the E would probably sound like the E in "egg". Homophones that depend on a non-universal form of pronunciation are, I think, best avoided.
"Etonian rascals are, primarily, after a second piece of property"- it's not libel! (7)
In this clue, I would have preferred to see the initialism indicator next to the fodder. The interposition of "are" could be misleading. "It's not libel" isn't a good definition, I think.
freda
Dish the dirt on, astonishingly, Landseer - and without a shred of evidence (7)
Welcome freda. For a first entry, this is very good indeed. The main issue is that the solution is easy to spot from the anagram fodder, but this is nonetheless *** SHORTLISTED ***
metame
Misleading statement: "on the one hand, South, and on the other, East" (6)
Very clever piece of wordplay (although this would only work for a down clue, as "on" would mean the opposite for an across clue). "Misleading statement" isn't quite right, but the wordplay is great.
adams
"Loveless Mosley stripped and inserted head of rodent!" That's libel, I say (7)
Clever wordplay, with a nod to recent events. The only element that doesn't convince me is "I say". Perhaps "if reported" or "if broadcast" would have been better, at least for the English definition.
Roast pork pies? (7)
Again, this one falls foul of my view of the definition.
newton
Savage heartlessly, without grounds? Right (7)
Welcome, newton (though some of us already know of you via Twitter) and what a great way to introduce yourself! This is very good stuff, and works for me as an &lit, because "right" can be seen as a response to the preceding QM. Perhaps "that's right" would have sounded more natural, but this one is certainly *** SHORTLISTED ***